I liked the haiku from the packet
The falling flower- Babette Deutsch
The falling flower
I saw drift back to the branch
Was a butterfly.
I've always liked the form of Haiku's and how they usually pertain to nature and are short and sweet but give such a large image. However I'm not good at writing them. this one stuck out to me because it mentions to of my favorite things butterflies and flowers.
I have to agree I like this haiku as well. I too have problems with this form. But I do like how she (Babette) the two things and expressed them so beautifully.
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